Nice try but did you take sometime and actually think about what you were gonna write? Instead of taking 5 minutes to write a poem try and take about 5 hours and really think from the heart. You shouldnt just jot down anything on paper and call it a poem. This is what I would call 5 minute poetry poking fun at the newbies.
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